The feedback I got from my Pitch was not what I expected, because I presented my second idea as well as my main idea but Kate and the rest of the class actually ended up preferring the second idea, because they felt it went with the rules i set for myself, the fact that teenagers are more on their phones and tablets not watching tv. Kate said the reason i backed out of the bigger idea is because i got a little scared which is true, i felt like it was too big and i wouldnt be able to do it, but hearing the feed back the class gave me im now switching back to the second idea, the art and visual style will stay the same and the general idea will stay the same.
though i wanted the message at the end to be 'dont standby and watch it happen' which would have gone well for the TV idea i could possibly still use the slogan but i will think of one which applies more to the idea.
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