Crit

Today I showed the class how far i have come in creating my poster, I explained that the poster clearly isn't finished and i still had a lot of work to do but any feedback they could give me would be very helpful.

I showed my poster and the original poster i based it on.
This is what my class saw. 

The feedback i received was:

• Add another iconic statue, the london eye preferably and make them smaller so they fit into the background more.
• make the text in the middle 'now you can follow me anywhere' stretched so its taller not so compacted. 
• make the twitter birds more flowing.
• change the colour of the sky to match the original poster.
• more texture on her body and dress so it doesn't look as flat. 
• make sure when she is properly holding the phone she has her fingers wrapped round
• work on arms more, the arm holding the phone to masculine
• space the bottom text out, again not so compact.

I  will work on my poster taking the comments I received on board. I think my poster has a long way to come with not a lot of time left, but I am confident that the end result will be good.