Pitch

at the beginning of the week i pitched my idea to my class, I got some feedback about the design i have come up with most people say they liked the river how it went round and down past the tree, and they said they was unsure of where the text was placed and how big it was. though im not sure i agree fully with this comment as the brief says that the tittle must be a big part of the cover though i will take there comments into conicdration. i think that the pitch went well though now im unsure of my idea, im still sketching out new ideas to see if i can come up with anything better.

here are print screens of my pitch.