closing sequence improvement

I wasn't sure on what to put really for the closing sequence because it probably could have been a block colour with some credits scrolling up, but i kept it in the theme with my opening sequence with slightly different footage, but I'm not 100% on it.

I also created this closing sequence as an alternative because i think the red background goes best with the rest of the work i have done, Im not sure on the font, I only chose to use this because its the same as the section font.  it's called passion its big, readable and bold also its a free download from 1001freefonts.

i prefer this to the original. All I need to do it make slow it down so it lasts 20 seconds & also I will add some background music to finish it off.